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June 26, 2007
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Feb 24, 2005, 6:22:30 AM
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:icondemosthenesvoice:
This is just the first draft, its not done yet, but i wanted to get some feedback on the progress so far, so feel free to rip it apart, i always love feedback of anykind!
and specail thanks to Josh Clark for his extreme amout of inspiraton and help with this piece.
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A few random thoughts cross my mind here, hope you don't mind me saying these things.

1) Get the blending down. The edges are either too soft (the girl), or a little too harsh (the plants). There's a tiny little margin where they blend perfectly and look natural.

2) Make the stars look organic. Right now, they look a little bit too much like a brush. The planets and galaxy work pretty well, but the little stars themselves are a little bit too cookie-cutter. If you want a good tutorial to figure out how to do stars, try [link] . Its helped me a lot. Sorry about just pasting the link in there, I'm too tired to remember the HTML code.

Other than those two things, it looks really good. I'm quite impressed by your work, and I think that this piece could turn out quite beautifully!
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:icondemosthenesvoice:
Thanks man, i like where your minds at, those are some good ideas, and ill definatley give it a shot. and about the stars, i agree completely, its just the best star brush ive been able to find, so im hopeful about that tut. thanks again!
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