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Heaven's Dead WIP by =DemosthenesVoice:iconDemosthenesVoice:

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Submitted: July 14, 2008
File Size: 3.8 MB
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The WIP of the second in the Heaven's Trilogy.
Some parts were recycled from the first, Heaven's Gate, on purpose.

not quite sure how happy i am about this one, some of it i really like, some of it i hate. critique is always welcome and encouraged.

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~PhobosKE:iconPhobosKE: Jul 14, 2008, 2:10:13 AM
ok so the nebula is good it whole has great colors but those planets could be better ;-) and maybe more stars on the background

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=DemosthenesVoice:iconDemosthenesVoice: Jul 14, 2008, 2:16:10 AM
cool man, thanks

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~reddeath-689:iconreddeath-689: Jul 14, 2008, 2:33:22 AM
the angle of the gun is totally wrong for the splatter.
also... i must say this is not one of your better pics...

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=BLUE-F0X:iconBLUE-F0X: Jul 14, 2008, 2:54:45 AM
The color alone makes in win material. I kind of don't like the people in it.

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~ARTek92:iconARTek92: Jul 14, 2008, 3:27:07 AM
Nice, but I would add more stars. I don't like these ppl, remove them and everything should be ok ;p
=synax444:iconsynax444: Jul 14, 2008, 3:52:35 AM
Straight up BAD ASS, only thing I'd change is the starfield ;)

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=Star-one:iconStar-one: Jul 14, 2008, 3:56:08 AM
The top planets are both inside the rings.?
never saw that before it could happen i guess but i dont know it looks kinda weird.
and like already saud the angle on the gun is indeed wrong.
not your best obviously!

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=graphicqueen91:icongraphicqueen91: Jul 14, 2008, 4:36:08 AM
Woah, that is so totally wicked! There is blood pouring from his head, and it's not even falling, it's a straight burst - sweet!!! ...Ok, that sounds weird that I think that's is cool but...oh well. Awesome!
Aww, no, heaven, I have people up there! Curse you, curse you to death *throttles you...no, better yet, shoots your head to bloody pieces* lmao
But really, amazing! I love the colors.
<3

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~PhobosKE:iconPhobosKE: Jul 14, 2008, 5:40:21 AM
np man that was just my opinion :-)

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