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Nov 15, 2008, 6:21:04 PM
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:iconbillndrsn:
*billndrsn Mar 30, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
:nod:
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~cchomikk Mar 30, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
gg. lovely haze in the sky ;)
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=ErikShoemaker Mar 30, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I like the colors of the background and the composition, but the planet and the clouds are way too bright to be honest. Good job though.
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:icondemosthenesvoice:
thanks man. and yes, i was having a hell of a time trying to blend the clouds/planet. any tips on how to fix it?
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=ErikShoemaker Mar 30, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hm, I think the whole scene is a bit weird. The sky tells me it is nighttime, but the clouds and the planet are lit and very bright. You have to chose whether you want a day or a night sky. The planet where the viewer is standing doesn't seem to have a proper atmopshere, at least if you decide for a day-scene. I think the planet should blend with the sky like this: [link]
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:icondemosthenesvoice:
awesome man, you bring up some points i didnt even think about. so thank you. ill definitely keep it in mind. as always, its greatly appreciated.
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=ErikShoemaker Mar 31, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
you're welcome, glad I could help. :) Btw I've sent a note to jesus, he asked for a bit more critique. I suppose he's currently working on it.
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:icondemosthenesvoice:
indeed he is, and thank you greatly for that as well :D
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=ErikShoemaker Apr 1, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D
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