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So this is my first published project in Flash. in reality, this is my first anything in flash. started learning it about a week ago, logging in about 5 or 6 hours a day. :P it was pretty crazy. so yea, i know there are a lot of glitches and such, rusty movements. but im pretty happy with it.

but please, crit the shit out of it, i want to get better!! if anyone can help, or has any awesome tutorials or resources or wants to play around with my .fla and show me how its done, let me know. any help is appreciated.

Also, there is supposed to be an intro video during the intro, but its not actually mine, i just wanted to practice working with video, but i cant upload it on dev. also, no music either, same copyright reason.
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:iconctcfirebird:
CTCFirebird Featured By Owner May 21, 2009
Very Cool!
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:icondemosthenesvoice:
DemosthenesVoice Featured By Owner May 31, 2009
thanks!
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:iconctcfirebird:
CTCFirebird Featured By Owner May 31, 2009
:)
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:iconsk8peace:
sk8peace Featured By Owner May 21, 2009  Student Digital Artist
man i keep telling you...
1. mask off the girl so the clouds go behind her.
2. add the date to your clock.

other than that, not bad for the post...
gallery looks good, nice to see that you added it.
add something to the left side of your home page.
Also, seeing how your posting this for deviant, your going to need to totally revap your intro seeing how you can't use the video... maybe a slideshow of some of your pieces?


P.S. aren't you supposed to be packing?
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:icondemosthenesvoice:
DemosthenesVoice Featured By Owner May 31, 2009
slut
get up here fool.
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CsmcVisn Featured By Owner May 21, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That better not be your actual phone number...>_>
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:icondemosthenesvoice:
DemosthenesVoice Featured By Owner May 31, 2009
uh.... o shit
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Holw1ll Featured By Owner May 21, 2009
Epic for a first go at flash, when I tried flash it made me cry XD
The intro was a bit slow but otherwise it's alll goood!
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:icondemosthenesvoice:
DemosthenesVoice Featured By Owner May 31, 2009
thanks man. and i know what you mean, flash is rough. i was that bored. yea.
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Eruantien-Fett Featured By Owner May 21, 2009
intro start is a bit slow, and if you're going to do the whole movie scroll thing I suggest some light music. Possibly epic music. but the only real crit i have is how slow the intro start is from when I actually hit start.
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